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Ep.8 πŸ’Ό 퇴사 μ‚¬μœ λ₯Ό μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ½κ²Œ ν‘œν˜„ν•˜λŠ” 방법: λΌˆλŒ€μ™€ 핡심 ν‘œν˜„λ§Œ μ™Έμš°κΈ° 30κ°€μ§€ 예문

λ©΄μ ‘μ—μ„œ κ°€μž₯ λ―Όκ°ν•œ 질문 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜μΈ β€œμ™œ μ§€κΈˆ νšŒμ‚¬λ₯Ό λ– λ‚˜λ €κ³  ν•˜λ‚˜μš”?(Why are you leaving your current company?)”에 λŒ€ν•œ 닡변을 μ€€λΉ„ν•΄ λ³΄κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

λ¬Έκ³Όμƒλ‹˜μ΄ λ§μ”€ν•˜μ…¨λ“―μ΄, λͺ¨λ“  λ¬Έμž₯을 μ™Έμš°λ €κ³  ν•˜λ©΄ λΆ€λ‹΄μŠ€λŸ½κ³  μ‹€μ œ λ©΄μ ‘μ—μ„œ λ‘œλ΄‡μ²˜λŸΌ λ§ν•˜κ²Œ 될 κ°€λŠ₯성이 λ†’μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λŒ€μ‹  λ‹΅λ³€μ˜ ꡬ쑰와 핡심 λΈŒλ¦Ώμ§€ ν‘œν˜„λ§Œ μž‘μ•„κ°€λŠ” 것이 더 νš¨κ³Όμ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이번 κΈ€μ—μ„œλŠ” λ‹€μ–‘ν•œ 상황에 맞좘 퇴사 μ‚¬μœ  μ˜ˆμ‹œ 30κ°€μ§€λ₯Ό μ†Œκ°œν•˜λ©°, 각 μ˜ˆμ‹œμ—μ„œ ν™œμš©ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” λΌˆλŒ€μ™€ λΈŒλ¦Ώμ§€ ν‘œν˜„μ„ κ°•μ‘°ν•˜κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

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퇴사 μ‚¬μœ  λ‹΅λ³€μ˜ κΈ°λ³Έ ꡬ쑰 (λΌˆλŒ€)

효과적인 퇴사 μ‚¬μœ  닡변을 μœ„ν•œ 4단계 ꡬ성:

  1. ν˜„ 직μž₯에 λŒ€ν•œ 긍정적인 μ–ΈκΈ‰ – β€œI’ve really enjoyed my time at…”
  2. 얻은 κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό μ„±μž₯에 λŒ€ν•œ 감사 – β€œI’ve gained valuable experience in…”
  3. μ„±μž₯의 ν•œκ³„ μ„€λͺ… – β€œHowever, I’m now looking for…”
  4. μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ κΈ°νšŒμ— λŒ€ν•œ κΈ°λŒ€ – β€œThat’s why I’m excited about…”

이제 λ‹€μ–‘ν•œ μƒν™©λ³„λ‘œ 이 ꡬ쑰λ₯Ό ν™œμš©ν•œ 퇴사 μ‚¬μœ  μ˜ˆμ‹œλ₯Ό μ‚΄νŽ΄λ³΄κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.


1. μ„±μž₯ 기회 λΆ€μ‘±μœΌλ‘œ μΈν•œ 퇴사 (HR 직무 사둀)

핡심 ν‘œν˜„:

  • β€œThe public theater where I’m currently working is a place where people genuinely want to stay, so the managers don’t leave very often.”
  • β€œI’ve gained valuable experience in HR-related operations here and really enjoyed working with my supportive team.”
  • β€œHowever, there weren’t many opportunities to grow within the company.”
  • β€œI’ve reached the point where I wish to deepen my understanding of HR planning and management.”
  • β€œThat’s why I’m looking for an opportunity to further develop my professional skills and expand my horizon.”

ν™•μž₯ 버전: β€œI have really enjoyed my time at the public theater. It’s honestly a great place to work. The environment is so positive that managers rarely leave! I have gained really valuable experience in HR operations there and have had the chance to work with an amazing team. The thing is, while it’s a fantastic workplace, the structure is pretty flat with long-term managers who’ve been there for years. It’s actually a testament to how good the place is! But at this point in my career, I’m looking to deepen my understanding of HR planning and take on more leadership responsibilities. I feel ready to broaden my skills and expand my professional horizons. I have thought about this carefully, and I believe now is the right time to seek new challenges that align with my career goals. What attracts me to your company specifically is the opportunity to grow in the HR field and contribute at a higher level.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„μž¬ νšŒμ‚¬λŠ” 정말 쒋은 곳이라 μ‚¬λžŒλ“€μ΄ 였래 λ¨Έλ¬ΌλŸ¬μš”β€
  2. β€œHR κ΄€λ ¨ κ·€μ€‘ν•œ κ²½ν—˜μ„ μŒ“μ•˜κ³  쒋은 νŒ€κ³Ό μΌν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ μ„±μž₯ κΈ°νšŒκ°€ μ œν•œμ μ΄μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ΄μ œ HR 지식을 더 깊이 λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  μ‹Άμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·Έλž˜μ„œ μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 도전과 μ„±μž₯ 기회λ₯Ό μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€

2. 더 큰 μ±…μž„κ³Ό 리더십 역할을 μ°Ύμ•„μ„œ

β€œI’ve spent three valuable years at my current company where I’ve been able to develop strong technical skills and contribute to several successful projects. I’m particularly grateful for the mentorship I’ve received and the collaborative team environment. However, as I’ve continued to grow, I’ve realized I’m ready to take on more leadership responsibilities than my current role can offer. I’ve already started mentoring junior team members informally, and I find that I’m passionate about developing others while tackling more complex strategic challenges. Your company’s reputation for promoting from within and investing in leadership development is what drew me to this opportunity.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ κ·€μ€‘ν•œ 기술과 κ²½ν—˜μ„ μŒ“μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œλ©˜ν† μ‹­κ³Ό ν˜‘μ—… ν™˜κ²½μ— κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ΄μ œλŠ” 더 λ§Žμ€ 리더십 μ±…μž„μ„ 맑을 μ€€λΉ„κ°€ λ˜μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ£Όλ‹ˆμ–΄ 멀버λ₯Ό λ©˜ν† λ§ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ 더 λ³΅μž‘ν•œ 도전에 관심이 μƒκ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 리더십 개발 νˆ¬μžκ°€ 이 κΈ°νšŒμ— 끌리게 ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€

3. νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ λ°©ν–₯μ„± λ³€ν™”λ‘œ μΈν•œ 퇴사

β€œWhen I joined my current organization three years ago, I was excited about their focus on innovative product development, which aligned perfectly with my skills and interests. I’ve had the opportunity to work on challenging projects and develop expertise in my field. However, the company has recently shifted its strategic direction to focus more on services rather than product innovation. While I respect this business decision, my passion remains in cutting-edge product development. That’s why I’m seeking a role like this one, where I can continue to grow in the area I’m most passionate about and where my strengths can make the greatest impact.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œμž…μ‚¬ λ‹Ήμ‹œ νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ ν˜μ‹ μ  μ œν’ˆ κ°œλ°œμ— ν₯λ―Έλ₯Ό λŠκΌˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œλ„μ „μ μΈ ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈλ‘œ 전문성을 μŒ“μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ΅œκ·Ό νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ μ „λž΅μ  λ°©ν–₯이 λ³€κ²½λ˜μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ΄ 결정을 μ‘΄μ€‘ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, 제 열정은 μ—¬μ „νžˆ μ œν’ˆ κ°œλ°œμ— μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·Έλž˜μ„œ 제 강점을 살리고 열정을 μ΄μ–΄κ°ˆ 수 μžˆλŠ” 역할을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€

4. μž¬νƒκ·Όλ¬΄/원격근무 기회 탐색

β€œI’ve greatly valued my time at my current company, where I’ve been able to develop my skills in [specific area] and collaborate with talented colleagues. The company has provided me with a solid foundation in the industry, and I’ve consistently exceeded my performance targets. However, as my life circumstances have evolved, I’m seeking a position that offers more flexibility in terms of remote work options. I’ve found that I’m highly productive in a remote environment, and I’m looking for a company that embraces this modern approach to work while still offering challenging projects and growth opportunities. Your company’s reputation for having a results-focused culture that supports flexible working arrangements is what attracted me to this position.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  λ›°μ–΄λ‚œ λ™λ£Œλ“€κ³Ό ν˜‘μ—…ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμ—…κ³„μ— λŒ€ν•œ νƒ„νƒ„ν•œ κΈ°λ°˜μ„ μŒ“κ³  μ„±κ³Ό λͺ©ν‘œλ₯Ό κΎΈμ€€νžˆ 초과 λ‹¬μ„±ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμƒν™œ ν™˜κ²½μ΄ 변화함에 따라 원격 근무 μ˜΅μ…˜μ΄ μžˆλŠ” 직책을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ›κ²© ν™˜κ²½μ—μ„œ 높은 생산성을 λ°œνœ˜ν•œλ‹€λŠ” 것을 μ•Œκ²Œ λ˜μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ μœ μ—°ν•œ 근무 ν™˜κ²½μ„ μ§€μ›ν•˜λŠ” κ²°κ³Ό 쀑심 문화에 λ§€λ ₯을 λŠκΌˆμ–΄μš”β€

5. 더 λ‚˜μ€ 업계/λΆ„μ•Όλ‘œμ˜ μ „ν™˜

β€œWorking at my current company in the [current industry] has been a valuable experience where I’ve developed transferable skills in [specific skills]. I appreciate the opportunities I’ve had to [mention achievements]. However, I’ve always been passionate about [target industry], and I’ve been actively developing relevant knowledge and skills in this area through [courses/certifications/side projects]. When I saw this opportunity with your company, it seemed like the perfect chance to combine my established professional experience with the field I’m truly passionate about. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my unique perspective from [current industry] to contribute to your team’s success.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ μ—…κ³„μ—μ„œ κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” κ²½ν—˜μ„ μŒ“κ³  λ²”μš© κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œμΌ°μ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμ§€κΈˆκΉŒμ§€μ˜ κΈ°νšŒμ™€ 성취에 κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ 항상 [λͺ©ν‘œ μ‚°μ—…]에 열정이 μžˆμ—ˆκ³  κ΄€λ ¨ 지식을 적극적으둜 κ°œλ°œν•΄μ™”μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ κΈ°νšŒλŠ” 제 μ „λ¬Έ κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό μ§„μ •ν•œ 열정을 κ²°ν•©ν•  μ™„λ²½ν•œ 기회둜 λ³΄μ—¬μš”β€
  5. β€œν˜„ μ‚°μ—…μ—μ„œμ˜ λ…νŠΉν•œ 관점을 가져와 νŒ€μ˜ 성곡에 κΈ°μ—¬ν•˜κ³  μ‹Άμ–΄μš”β€

6. κΈ°μ—… λ¬Έν™”/κ°€μΉ˜κ΄€ 뢈일치

β€œI’ve spent the past four years at my current company, where I’ve been able to develop strong skills in [specific area] and achieve [mention achievements]. I’m grateful for these experiences and the relationships I’ve built. However, as I’ve grown professionally, I’ve gained clarity about the type of organizational culture where I thrive best. I’m looking for an environment that places a stronger emphasis on [specific values important to you, e.g., collaboration, innovation, work-life balance]. From my research and our conversations so far, your company seems to prioritize these values, which is why I’m excited about the possibility of joining your team.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ λ§Žμ€ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  μ„±μ·¨λ₯Ό μ΄λ£¨μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό 관계에 κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ „λ¬Έμ μœΌλ‘œ μ„±μž₯ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ μ œκ°€ κ°€μž₯ 잘 λ°œνœ˜λ˜λŠ” 쑰직 문화에 λŒ€ν•œ λͺ…확성을 μ–»μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[νŠΉμ • κ°€μΉ˜]λ₯Ό 더 κ°•μ‘°ν•˜λŠ” ν™˜κ²½μ„ μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬λŠ” μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ°€μΉ˜λ₯Ό μš°μ„ μ‹œν•˜λŠ” 것 κ°™μ•„ ν•©λ₯˜ν•  κ°€λŠ₯성에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

7. 직무 μ—­ν• μ˜ λ³€ν™” 좔ꡬ

β€œIn my current position at [Company], I’ve had the opportunity to develop expertise in [specific area] and contribute to [specific achievements]. I’ve enjoyed the collaborative environment and learned a great deal from my colleagues. However, after reflecting on my career trajectory, I’ve realized that I’m most energized by work that involves [describe desired role focus]. While my current role touches on these areas occasionally, I’m seeking a position where this would be my primary focus. When I saw this opportunity with your company, it seemed like an ideal match for the direction I want to take my career while still building on the foundation I’ve established.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ μ§μ±…μ—μ„œ 전문성을 κ°œλ°œν•˜κ³  성취에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œν˜‘μ—… ν™˜κ²½μ„ 즐기고 λ™λ£Œλ“€λ‘œλΆ€ν„° 많이 λ°°μ› μ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ»€λ¦¬μ–΄ ꢀ적을 λŒμ•„λ³΄λ©° [μ›ν•˜λŠ” μ—­ν•  초점]을 ν¬ν•¨ν•˜λŠ” 일에 κ°€μž₯ ν™œλ ₯을 μ–»λŠ”λ‹€λŠ” 것을 κΉ¨λ‹¬μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œν˜„ 역할은 μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ μ˜μ—­μ„ 가끔 λ‹€λ£¨μ§€λ§Œ, 이것이 μ£Όμš” 초점인 직책을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ κΈ°νšŒλŠ” μ œκ°€ κ΅¬μΆ•ν•œ 기반 μœ„μ—μ„œ 제 컀리어λ₯Ό λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κΈ°μ— 이상적인 맀치둜 λ³΄μ—¬μš”β€

8. 이직을 ν†΅ν•œ 기술 ν™•μž₯κ³Ό 도전

β€œI’ve greatly valued my time at [Current Company], where I’ve been able to build a strong foundation in [specific skills]. The team has been supportive, and I’ve contributed to [specific achievements]. However, I’ve reached a point where I’m eager to expand my skill set and take on new challenges that aren’t available in my current role. I’m particularly interested in developing expertise in [specific skills], which I know is central to this position. Your company’s reputation for [specific strength of the company] and the scope of this role seem to offer exactly the kind of professional growth opportunity I’m seeking at this stage in my career.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 νƒ„νƒ„ν•œ κΈ°λ°˜μ„ μŒ“μ„ 수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œνŒ€μ΄ μ§€μ›μ μ΄μ—ˆκ³  [νŠΉμ • μ„±κ³Ό]에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ΄μ œλŠ” ν˜„ μ—­ν• μ—μ„œλŠ” κ°€λŠ₯ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ€ μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 도전과 κΈ°μˆ μ„ ν™•μž₯ν•˜κ³  μ‹Άμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[νŠΉμ • 기술]에 전문성을 λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€λŠ” 데 특히 관심이 μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ λͺ…μ„±κ³Ό 이 μ—­ν• μ˜ λ²”μœ„λŠ” 제 컀리어 λ‹¨κ³„μ—μ„œ μ°Ύκ³  μžˆλŠ” 전문적 μ„±μž₯ 기회λ₯Ό μ œκ³΅ν•  것 κ°™μ•„μš”β€

9. 쑰직 ꡬ쑰쑰정 ν›„ μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 기회 λͺ¨μƒ‰

β€œOver the past three years at [Current Company], I’ve had valuable opportunities to develop my skills in [specific area] and collaborate on [specific projects]. I’m proud of what our team has accomplished together. Recently, however, the company underwent a significant restructuring that changed the nature of my role and the department’s focus. While I understand the business reasons behind these changes, I believe this is an opportune time for me to seek a position that better aligns with my professional strengths and career goals. Your company’s focus on [specific aspect of company] resonates with the direction I want to take my career, which is why I was immediately interested when I saw this opening.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈμ— ν˜‘μ—…ν•  κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” 기회λ₯Ό κ°€μ‘Œμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμš°λ¦¬ νŒ€μ΄ ν•¨κ»˜ 이룬 μ„±κ³Όκ°€ μžλž‘μŠ€λŸ¬μ›Œμš”β€
  3. β€œμ΅œκ·Ό νšŒμ‚¬κ°€ μƒλ‹Ήν•œ ꡬ쑰쑰정을 거쳐 제 μ—­ν• κ³Ό λΆ€μ„œμ˜ 초점이 λ³€κ²½λ˜μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ λ³€ν™”μ˜ λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ 이유λ₯Ό μ΄ν•΄ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, 제 전문적 강점과 컀리어 λͺ©ν‘œμ— 더 잘 λ§žλŠ” 직책을 찾기에 μ μ ˆν•œ μ‹œκΈ°λΌκ³  μƒκ°ν•΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ [νŠΉμ • μΈ‘λ©΄]에 λŒ€ν•œ μ΄ˆμ μ€ μ œκ°€ 컀리어λ₯Ό λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  싢은 λ°©ν–₯κ³Ό μΌμΉ˜ν•΄μš”β€

10. κΈ°μ—… 인수/합병 ν›„ μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ ν™˜κ²½ 탐색

β€œDuring my four years at [Current Company], I’ve developed strong expertise in [specific skills] and had the opportunity to [specific accomplishments]. Last year, our company was acquired by [Acquiring Company], which has naturally led to some changes in organizational culture and priorities. While I respect the new direction, I believe this transition period is a good time for me to evaluate what I want in the next phase of my career. What attracts me to your company is [specific aspect of company], which aligns well with my professional values and aspirations. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my experience to a team that’s focused on [company goal/mission].”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ κ°•λ ₯ν•œ 전문성을 κ°œλ°œν•˜κ³  μ„±μ·¨ν•  기회λ₯Ό κ°€μ‘Œμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμž‘λ…„μ— νšŒμ‚¬κ°€ μΈμˆ˜λ˜μ–΄ 쑰직 문화와 μš°μ„ μˆœμœ„μ— λ³€ν™”κ°€ μƒκ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμƒˆλ‘œμš΄ λ°©ν–₯을 μ‘΄μ€‘ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, 이 μ „ν™˜ 기간은 제 μ»€λ¦¬μ–΄μ˜ λ‹€μŒ λ‹¨κ³„μ—μ„œ μ›ν•˜λŠ” 것을 ν‰κ°€ν•˜κΈ° 쒋은 μ‹œκΈ°λΌκ³  μƒκ°ν•΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ [νŠΉμ • μΈ‘λ©΄]이 제 전문적 κ°€μΉ˜μ™€ 열망에 잘 λ§žμ•„ λ§€λ ₯μ μ΄μ—μš”β€
  5. β€œ[νšŒμ‚¬ λͺ©ν‘œ/λ―Έμ…˜]에 μ§‘μ€‘ν•˜λŠ” νŒ€μ— 제 κ²½ν—˜μ„ κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ κ°€λŠ₯성에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

11. ꡐ톡 νŽΈμ˜μ„±/μœ„μΉ˜ λ³€κ²½μœΌλ‘œ μΈν•œ 이직

β€œMy experience at [Current Company] has been very positive, allowing me to develop my skills in [specific area] and work with a talented team. I’ve particularly valued [specific positive aspect of job]. However, my personal circumstances have changed, and I’m now looking for an opportunity closer to [location] to [reason: reduce commute time/be closer to family/etc.]. When I saw this position with your company, I was excited because it combines the type of work I enjoy and excel at with a location that better suits my current situation. I believe I could bring valuable experience and perspective to your team while achieving better work-life integration.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ κ²½ν—˜μ€ 맀우 κΈμ •μ μ΄μ—ˆκ³ , κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  λ›°μ–΄λ‚œ νŒ€κ³Ό 일할 수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œ[νŠΉμ • 긍정적 μΈ‘λ©΄]을 특히 κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ 개인적 상황이 λ³€κ²½λ˜μ–΄ [μœ„μΉ˜]에 더 κ°€κΉŒμš΄ 기회λ₯Ό μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 이 직책이 μ œκ°€ 즐기고 μž˜ν•˜λŠ” 일과 제 ν˜„ 상황에 더 잘 λ§žλŠ” μœ„μΉ˜λ₯Ό κ²°ν•©ν•΄μ„œ κΈ°λŒ€λμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œλ” λ‚˜μ€ 일과 μ‚Άμ˜ 톡합을 μ΄λ£¨λ©΄μ„œ νŒ€μ— κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό 관점을 κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ 수 μžˆλ‹€κ³  λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€

12. 업계 νŠΈλ Œλ“œ 변화에 λ”°λ₯Έ 이직

β€œIn my role at [Current Company], I’ve built valuable expertise in [specific skills] and contributed to [specific achievements]. I’ve appreciated the collaborative environment and learning opportunities. However, I’ve been closely following industry trends toward [specific trend], and I’m eager to be more involved in this developing area. While my current company is excellent in many ways, they’re moving more slowly in this direction than I’d like for my career growth. Your company’s leadership in [specific area] is well-known, and I’m excited about the opportunity to be part of a team that’s at the forefront of these industry developments while applying the strong foundation I’ve built in my current role.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ μ—­ν• μ—μ„œ κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” 전문성을 μŒ“κ³  성취에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œν˜‘μ—… ν™˜κ²½κ³Ό ν•™μŠ΅ κΈ°νšŒμ— κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œ[νŠΉμ • νŠΈλ Œλ“œ]에 λŒ€ν•œ 업계 동ν–₯을 μ£Όμ‹œν•΄μ™”κ³ , 이 λ°œμ „ 뢄야에 더 κ΄€μ—¬ν•˜κ³  μ‹Άμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬λŠ” μ—¬λŸ¬ λ©΄μ—μ„œ ν›Œλ₯­ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, 제 컀리어 μ„±μž₯을 μœ„ν•΄ μ›ν•˜λŠ” 것보닀 이 λ°©ν–₯으둜 더 천천히 움직이고 μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­] 리더십은 잘 μ•Œλ €μ Έ 있으며, μ œκ°€ κ΅¬μΆ•ν•œ νƒ„νƒ„ν•œ κΈ°λ°˜μ„ μ μš©ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ 업계 λ°œμ „μ˜ μ΅œμ „μ„ μ— μžˆλŠ” νŒ€μ˜ 일원이 될 κΈ°νšŒμ— κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

13. ꡐ윑적 μ„±μž₯ 기회λ₯Ό μœ„ν•œ 이직

β€œI’ve greatly valued my three years at [Current Company], where I’ve been able to [specific accomplishments]. The team has been supportive, and I’ve learned a lot about [specific area]. However, I’m at a point in my career where I’m looking to expand my knowledge and skills in [specific area], which is somewhat limited in my current role. Your company’s reputation for investing in employee development through [specific programs/training] is very appealing to me. I’m excited about the possibility of joining an organization where I can continue to grow professionally while contributing my existing expertise to your team’s success.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ 3년을 맀우 κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κΈ°λ©°, [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]λ₯Ό 이룰 수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œνŒ€μ΄ μ§€μ›μ μ΄μ—ˆκ³  [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]에 λŒ€ν•΄ 많이 λ°°μ› μ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ ν˜„ μ—­ν• μ—μ„œλŠ” λ‹€μ†Œ μ œν•œμ μΈ [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]μ—μ„œ 지식과 κΈ°μˆ μ„ ν™•μž₯ν•˜κ³  싢은 컀리어 μ‹œμ μ— μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œκ·Έλž¨/ꡐ윑]을 ν†΅ν•œ 직원 κ°œλ°œμ— νˆ¬μžν•˜λŠ” κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ λͺ…성이 맀우 λ§€λ ₯μ μ΄μ—μš”β€
  5. β€œκΈ°μ‘΄ 전문성을 νŒ€μ˜ 성곡에 κΈ°μ—¬ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ μ „λ¬Έμ μœΌλ‘œ 계속 μ„±μž₯ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” 쑰직에 ν•©λ₯˜ν•  κ°€λŠ₯성에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

14. 보닀 고객 쀑심적인 μ—­ν•  좔ꡬ

β€œIn my current position at [Company], I’ve developed strong skills in [specific area] and have enjoyed working with my team on [specific projects/initiatives]. What I’ve found most fulfilling, however, are the occasions when I get to interact directly with customers and see how our work impacts their experience. These interactions have shown me that I’m passionate about customer-focused roles, but these opportunities are limited in my current position. When I saw this role with your company, I was excited because it would allow me to leverage my technical knowledge while focusing more directly on customer success. I believe my combination of technical expertise and customer empathy would be valuable to your team.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ μ§μ±…μ—μ„œ κ°•λ ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  νŒ€κ³Ό ν•¨κ»˜ [νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ/μ΄λ‹ˆμ…”ν‹°λΈŒ]에 μ°Έμ—¬ν•΄ μ¦κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ κ°€μž₯ 보람 μžˆμ—ˆλ˜ 것은 고객과 직접 μƒν˜Έμž‘μš©ν•˜κ³  우리 일이 κ·Έλ“€μ˜ κ²½ν—˜μ— μ–΄λ–€ 영ν–₯을 λ―ΈμΉ˜λŠ”μ§€ λ³Ό λ•Œμ˜€μ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ μƒν˜Έμž‘μš©μ€ μ œκ°€ 고객 쀑심 역할에 μ—΄μ •μ μ΄λΌλŠ” 것을 λ³΄μ—¬μ£Όμ—ˆμ§€λ§Œ, ν˜„ μ§μ±…μ—μ„œλŠ” μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κΈ°νšŒκ°€ μ œν•œμ μ΄μ—μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 이 역할을 λ³΄μ•˜μ„ λ•Œ, 기술적 지식을 ν™œμš©ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ 고객 성곡에 더 μ§μ ‘μ μœΌλ‘œ 집쀑할 수 μžˆμ–΄ κΈ°λŒ€λμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œμ œ 기술적 μ „λ¬Έμ„±κ³Ό 고객 곡감 λŠ₯λ ₯의 쑰합이 귀사 νŒ€μ— κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆμ„ 것이라고 λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€

15. μ›ŒλΌλ°Έ κ°œμ„ μ„ μœ„ν•œ 이직 (μ§μ ‘μ μœΌλ‘œ λ§ν•˜μ§€ μ•ŠκΈ°)

β€œMy time at [Current Company] has been rewarding, allowing me to develop expertise in [specific skills] and contribute to [specific achievements]. I’ve learned a great deal from my talented colleagues and am grateful for the opportunities I’ve had. At this point in my career, I’m seeking a role where I can continue to make meaningful contributions while working in an environment that supports sustainable high performance. I’m attracted to your company’s reputation for valuing employee wellbeing alongside excellence, which I believe creates the conditions for both personal satisfaction and strong business results. The scope of this role seems to offer the kind of impactful work I enjoy with a culture that aligns with my professional values.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ μ‹œκ°„μ€ 보람 μžˆμ—ˆκ³ , 전문성을 κ°œλ°œν•˜κ³  성취에 κΈ°μ—¬ν•  수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œλ›°μ–΄λ‚œ λ™λ£Œλ“€λ‘œλΆ€ν„° 많이 λ°°μ› κ³  κ°€μ‘Œλ˜ κΈ°νšŒμ— κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ΄μ œλŠ” 지속 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ 높은 μ„±κ³Όλ₯Ό μ§€μ›ν•˜λŠ” ν™˜κ²½μ—μ„œ 의미 μžˆλŠ” κΈ°μ—¬λ₯Ό 계속할 수 μžˆλŠ” 역할을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμš°μˆ˜μ„±κ³Ό ν•¨κ»˜ 직원 웰빙을 κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κΈ°λŠ” κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ λͺ…성에 λŒλ €μš”β€
  5. β€œμ΄ μ—­ν• μ˜ λ²”μœ„λŠ” μ œκ°€ μ¦κΈ°λŠ” 영ν–₯λ ₯ μžˆλŠ” 일과 제 전문적 κ°€μΉ˜μ™€ μΌμΉ˜ν•˜λŠ” λ¬Έν™”λ₯Ό μ œκ³΅ν•  것 κ°™μ•„μš”β€

16. μ§„λ‘œ λ°©ν–₯ 변경을 μœ„ν•œ 이직

β€œDuring my time at [Current Company], I’ve built strong skills in [specific area] and contributed to [specific accomplishments]. I’m grateful for these experiences and the relationships I’ve developed. Over the past year, however, I’ve been reflecting on my long-term career goals and realized I’m passionate about [new direction]. I’ve been actively developing relevant skills through [courses/side projects/etc.], and I’m now seeking a role that allows me to pursue this direction professionally. Your position seems to offer the perfect opportunity to leverage my transferable skills from [current field] while moving into [desired field]. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my unique perspective to your team.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ κ°•λ ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ μŒ“κ³  성취에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚¨ 관계에 κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ§€λ‚œ 1λ…„ λ™μ•ˆ μž₯기적인 컀리어 λͺ©ν‘œλ₯Ό λŒμ•„λ³΄λ©° [μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ λ°©ν–₯]에 열정이 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 것을 κΉ¨λ‹¬μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[κ³Όμ •/λΆ€μ—… λ“±]을 톡해 κ΄€λ ¨ κΈ°μˆ μ„ 적극적으둜 λ°œμ „μ‹œμΌœμ™”κ³ , 이 λ°©ν–₯을 μ „λ¬Έμ μœΌλ‘œ 좔ꡬ할 수 μžˆλŠ” 역할을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 직책은 [ν˜„ λΆ„μ•Ό]μ—μ„œμ˜ 이전 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ ν™œμš©ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ [μ›ν•˜λŠ” λΆ„μ•Ό]둜 이동할 수 μžˆλŠ” μ™„λ²½ν•œ 기회λ₯Ό μ œκ³΅ν•  것 κ°™μ•„μš”β€

17. νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ 볡지 ν˜œνƒμ„ κ³ λ €ν•œ 이직

β€œI’ve enjoyed my role at [Current Company] and have valued the opportunity to [specific accomplishments]. I’ve particularly appreciated working with my talented colleagues on [specific projects]. As I consider the next step in my career, I’m looking for a position that offers both professional growth and comprehensive benefits that support my long-term goals. Your company is known for investing in employees through both challenging work opportunities and supportive benefits like [specific benefits that appeal to you]. This holistic approach to employee satisfaction is very appealing to me, as I believe it creates an environment where people can do their best work while building a secure future.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ 역할을 즐기고 [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]의 기회λ₯Ό κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œλ›°μ–΄λ‚œ λ™λ£Œλ“€κ³Ό [νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ]μ—μ„œ μΌν•œ 것을 특히 κ°μ‚¬νžˆ μ—¬κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ»€λ¦¬μ–΄μ˜ λ‹€μŒ 단계λ₯Ό κ³ λ €ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ, 전문적 μ„±μž₯κ³Ό μž₯기적 λͺ©ν‘œλ₯Ό μ§€μ›ν•˜λŠ” 포괄적인 ν˜œνƒμ„ μ œκ³΅ν•˜λŠ” 직책을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬λŠ” 도전적인 μž‘μ—… κΈ°νšŒμ™€ [νŠΉμ • ν˜œνƒ]κ³Ό 같은 지원적인 ν˜œνƒμ„ 톡해 μ§μ›μ—κ²Œ νˆ¬μžν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ μ•Œλ €μ Έ μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ 직원 λ§Œμ‘±μ— λŒ€ν•œ 총체적 μ ‘κ·Ό 방식은 μ‚¬λžŒλ“€μ΄ μ•ˆμ •μ μΈ 미래λ₯Ό κ΅¬μΆ•ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ μ΅œμ„ μ˜ 일을 ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” ν™˜κ²½μ„ λ§Œλ“ λ‹€κ³  λ―ΏκΈ° λ•Œλ¬Έμ— 맀우 λ§€λ ₯μ μ΄μ—μš”β€

18. νšŒμ‚¬ 규λͺ¨ μ „ν™˜ (μ†Œκ·œλͺ¨β†’λŒ€κ·œλͺ¨)

β€œMy experience at [Current Company] has been incredibly valuable, allowing me to wear multiple hats and be involved in various aspects of the business. I’ve developed versatile skills and appreciate the entrepreneurial environment. At this stage in my career, however, I’m looking to specialize more deeply in [specific area] and work on larger-scale projects that would be possible in a more established organization. Your company offers the opportunity to focus my expertise while still maintaining the innovative culture I value. I’m excited about the prospect of bringing my adaptable perspective from a smaller company while learning from the established processes and wider resources available in your organization.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ κ²½ν—˜μ€ 맀우 κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆμ—ˆκ³ , μ—¬λŸ¬ 역할을 μˆ˜ν–‰ν•˜κ³  λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€μ˜ λ‹€μ–‘ν•œ 츑면에 κ΄€μ—¬ν•  수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œλ‹€μž¬λ‹€λŠ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  기업가적 ν™˜κ²½μ„ κ°μ‚¬νžˆ μ—¬κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ΄μ œλŠ” [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]에 더 깊이 μ „λ¬Έν™”ν•˜κ³  더 ν™•λ¦½λœ μ‘°μ§μ—μ„œ κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ λŒ€κ·œλͺ¨ ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈμ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜κ³  μ‹Άμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬λŠ” μ œκ°€ κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κΈ°λŠ” ν˜μ‹ μ  λ¬Έν™”λ₯Ό μœ μ§€ν•˜λ©΄μ„œλ„ 전문성을 집쀑할 기회λ₯Ό μ œκ³΅ν•΄μš”β€
  5. β€œλ” μž‘μ€ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ 적응 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ 관점을 κ°€μ Έμ˜€λ©΄μ„œ κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ ν™•λ¦½λœ ν”„λ‘œμ„ΈμŠ€μ™€ 더 넓은 μžμ›μœΌλ‘œλΆ€ν„° 배울 전망에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

19. νšŒμ‚¬ 규λͺ¨ μ „ν™˜ (λŒ€κ·œλͺ¨β†’μ†Œκ·œλͺ¨)

β€œWorking at [Current Large Company] has given me a solid foundation in [specific skills] and valuable experience with structured processes and enterprise-scale challenges. I’m grateful for the opportunities I’ve had to work on [specific projects] and learn from talented colleagues. However, I’ve realized that I thrive in environments where decisions move more quickly and I can have a more direct impact. A company at your growth stage offers the perfect opportunity for me to bring my enterprise-developed capabilities while working in a more agile, entrepreneurial setting. The desire to contribute more directly to a fast-moving organization is what led me to apply for this role with your company.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ λŒ€κΈ°μ—…μ—μ„œμ˜ κ·Όλ¬΄λŠ” [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 νƒ„νƒ„ν•œ 기반과 κ΅¬μ‘°ν™”λœ ν”„λ‘œμ„ΈμŠ€, κΈ°μ—… 규λͺ¨μ˜ 도전에 λŒ€ν•œ κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” κ²½ν—˜μ„ μ œκ³΅ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œ[νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ]에 μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜κ³  λ›°μ–΄λ‚œ λ™λ£Œλ“€λ‘œλΆ€ν„° 배울 κΈ°νšŒμ— κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œλΉ λ₯Έ 결정이 이루어지고 더 직접적인 영ν–₯을 λ―ΈμΉ  수 μžˆλŠ” ν™˜κ²½μ—μ„œ 더 λ²ˆμ°½ν•œλ‹€λŠ” 것을 κΉ¨λ‹¬μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ™€ 같은 μ„±μž₯ λ‹¨κ³„μ˜ νšŒμ‚¬λŠ” μ œκ°€ κΈ°μ—…μ—μ„œ κ°œλ°œν•œ μ—­λŸ‰μ„ κ°€μ Έμ˜€λ©΄μ„œ 더 λ―Όμ²©ν•œ ν™˜κ²½μ—μ„œ 일할 수 μžˆλŠ” μ™„λ²½ν•œ 기회λ₯Ό μ œκ³΅ν•΄μš”β€
  5. β€œλΉ λ₯΄κ²Œ μ›€μ§μ΄λŠ” μ‘°μ§μ—μ„œ 직접적인 영ν–₯을 λ―ΈμΉ˜λŠ” 데 κΈ°μ—¬ν•˜κ³  싢은 열망이 이 μ§€μ›μœΌλ‘œ μ΄μ–΄μ‘Œμ–΄μš”β€

20. μž„μ‹œ/κ³„μ•½μ§μ—μ„œ μ •κ·œμ§μœΌλ‘œ μ „ν™˜

β€œFor the past year, I’ve been working as a contractor at [Current Company] where I’ve built expertise in [specific skills] and contributed to [specific projects]. While I’ve valued the flexibility and variety of contract work, I’m now seeking a more permanent role where I can fully invest in a company’s long-term success and growth. When I saw this opportunity with your organization, I was immediately interested because it offers the chance to leverage my established skills in a stable environment where I can develop deeper relationships and make more sustained contributions. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my diverse experience to a team where I can put down professional roots and grow with the company.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œμ§€λ‚œ 1λ…„κ°„ [ν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬]μ—μ„œ κ³„μ•½μ§μœΌλ‘œ μΌν•˜λ©° [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 전문성을 μŒ“κ³  [νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ]에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œκ³„μ•½μ§μ˜ μœ μ—°μ„±κ³Ό 닀양성을 κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όμ§€λ§Œ, μ΄μ œλŠ” νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ μž₯기적 성곡과 μ„±μž₯에 μ™„μ „νžˆ νˆ¬μžν•  수 μžˆλŠ” 더 영ꡬ적인 역할을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 이 기회λ₯Ό λ³΄μ•˜μ„ λ•Œ, μ•ˆμ •μ μΈ ν™˜κ²½μ—μ„œ ν™•λ¦½λœ κΈ°μˆ μ„ ν™œμš©ν•˜κ³  더 κΉŠμ€ 관계λ₯Ό λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€λ©° 더 지속적인 κΈ°μ—¬λ₯Ό ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” 기회λ₯Ό μ œκ³΅ν•˜κΈ° λ•Œλ¬Έμ— μ¦‰μ‹œ 관심이 μƒκ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ „λ¬Έμ μΈ 뿌리λ₯Ό 내리고 νšŒμ‚¬μ™€ ν•¨κ»˜ μ„±μž₯ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” νŒ€μ— 제 λ‹€μ–‘ν•œ κ²½ν—˜μ„ κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ κ°€λŠ₯성에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

21. 쑰직적 λΆˆμ•ˆμ •μ„±μœΌλ‘œ μΈν•œ 퇴사

β€œDuring my time at [Current Company], I’ve had valuable opportunities to develop my skills in [specific area] and contribute to [specific projects]. I’ve enjoyed working with my team and am proud of what we’ve accomplished together. Unfortunately, the company has been going through significant changes recently, including [restructuring/leadership changes/financial challenges – whichever is public knowledge]. While I’ve remained committed through these transitions, I’m now seeking a more stable environment where I can focus fully on my work and professional growth. Your company’s established position in the industry and clear vision for the future is very appealing to me, and I believe my experience would allow me to make meaningful contributions to your team.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]의 κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  [νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ]에 κΈ°μ—¬ν•  κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” 기회λ₯Ό κ°€μ‘Œμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œνŒ€κ³Ό ν•¨κ»˜ μΌν•˜λŠ” 것을 즐겼고 μš°λ¦¬κ°€ ν•¨κ»˜ 이룬 μ„±κ³Όκ°€ μžλž‘μŠ€λŸ¬μ›Œμš”β€
  3. β€œλΆˆν–‰νžˆλ„, νšŒμ‚¬λŠ” 졜근 [ꡬ쑰쑰정/리더십 λ³€ν™”/μž¬μ •μ  도전] λ“± μ€‘λŒ€ν•œ λ³€ν™”λ₯Ό κ²ͺκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ μ „ν™˜ κ³Όμ •μ—μ„œλ„ ν—Œμ‹ μ μ΄μ—ˆμ§€λ§Œ, μ΄μ œλŠ” 제 일과 전문적 μ„±μž₯에 μ™„μ „νžˆ 집쀑할 수 μžˆλŠ” 더 μ•ˆμ •μ μΈ ν™˜κ²½μ„ μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œμ—…κ³„μ—μ„œ κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ ν™•λ¦½λœ μœ„μΉ˜μ™€ λ―Έλž˜μ— λŒ€ν•œ λͺ…ν™•ν•œ 비전이 맀우 λ§€λ ₯적이며, 제 κ²½ν—˜μ΄ 귀사 νŒ€μ— 의미 μžˆλŠ” κΈ°μ—¬λ₯Ό ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€κ³  λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€

22. μ—…κ³„μ˜ 본질적 변화에 λŒ€μ‘

β€œI’ve valued my five years at [Current Company], where I’ve developed expertise in [specific skills] and contributed to [specific achievements]. The industry, however, has undergone significant changes with [specific trend/technology shift], which has fundamentally altered how work is done. While my current company is adapting, I’m looking for an organization that’s at the forefront of embracing these changes. Your company’s leadership in [specific innovation] is what drew me to this opportunity. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my traditional industry knowledge while being part of a forward-thinking team that’s shaping the future of our field.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 전문성을 λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]에 κΈ°μ—¬ν•œ 5년을 κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ μ—…κ³„λŠ” [νŠΉμ • νŠΈλ Œλ“œ/기술 λ³€ν™”]둜 μ€‘λŒ€ν•œ λ³€ν™”λ₯Ό κ²ͺμ—ˆκ³ , μ΄λŠ” 일이 μˆ˜ν–‰λ˜λŠ” 방식을 근본적으둜 λ³€κ²½ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬κ°€ μ μ‘ν•˜κ³  μžˆμ§€λ§Œ, μ €λŠ” μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ λ³€ν™”λ₯Ό μˆ˜μš©ν•˜λŠ” μ΅œμ „μ„ μ— μžˆλŠ” 쑰직을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[νŠΉμ • ν˜μ‹ ]μ—μ„œ κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 리더십이 이 κΈ°νšŒμ— μ €λ₯Ό μ΄λŒμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œμ „ν†΅μ μΈ 업계 지식을 κ°€μ Έμ˜€λ©΄μ„œ 우리 λΆ„μ•Όμ˜ 미래λ₯Ό ν˜•μ„±ν•˜λŠ” 미래 μ§€ν–₯적인 νŒ€μ˜ 일원이 될 κ°€λŠ₯성에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

23. 개인적 μ—΄μ •/관심사에 더 κ°€κΉŒμš΄ μ—­ν•  μ°ΎκΈ°

β€œMy experience at [Current Company] has been valuable, allowing me to develop strong skills in [specific area] and work with talented colleagues. I’ve particularly enjoyed the aspects of my role that involve [specific tasks related to passion]. As I’ve progressed in my career, I’ve realized that I want to focus more directly on [area of passion] as my primary work rather than just one component of a broader role. When I saw this position with your company that centers specifically on [area of passion], it seemed like the perfect opportunity to align my professional path more closely with the work I find most meaningful and where I can add the most value.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ κ²½ν—˜μ€ κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆμ—ˆκ³ , [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]μ—μ„œ κ°•λ ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  λ›°μ–΄λ‚œ λ™λ£Œλ“€κ³Ό 일할 수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œ[μ—΄μ •κ³Ό κ΄€λ ¨λœ νŠΉμ • μž‘μ—…]을 ν¬ν•¨ν•˜λŠ” 제 μ—­ν• μ˜ 츑면을 특히 μ¦κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ»€λ¦¬μ–΄κ°€ 진행됨에 따라, 더 넓은 μ—­ν• μ˜ ν•œ ꡬ성 μš”μ†Œκ°€ μ•„λ‹Œ μ£Όμš” μ—…λ¬΄λ‘œ [μ—΄μ • μ˜μ—­]에 더 μ§μ ‘μ μœΌλ‘œ μ§‘μ€‘ν•˜κ³  μ‹Άλ‹€λŠ” 것을 κΉ¨λ‹¬μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œνŠΉνžˆ [μ—΄μ • μ˜μ—­]에 쀑점을 λ‘” κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 이 직책을 λ³΄μ•˜μ„ λ•Œ, 제 전문적 경둜λ₯Ό μ œκ°€ κ°€μž₯ 의미 μžˆλ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•˜κ³  κ°€μž₯ λ§Žμ€ κ°€μΉ˜λ₯Ό 더할 수 μžˆλŠ” 일에 더 κ°€κΉκ²Œ μΌμΉ˜μ‹œν‚¬ 수 μžˆλŠ” μ™„λ²½ν•œ 기회처럼 λ³΄μ˜€μ–΄μš”β€

24. 업계 λ‚΄μ—μ„œ λ‹€λ₯Έ λΆ€λ¬ΈμœΌλ‘œ 이동

β€œDuring my time at [Current Company] in the [current sector] side of our industry, I’ve developed strong skills in [specific skills] and contributed to [specific achievements]. I’m grateful for these experiences and the foundation they’ve provided. However, I’ve become increasingly interested in the [target sector] aspect of our industry and believe my background gives me a valuable perspective that could benefit organizations in this space. Your company’s reputation for excellence in [target sector], combined with the scope of this role, seems like an ideal opportunity for me to leverage my transferable skills while pursuing this new direction that I’m passionate about.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œμš°λ¦¬ μ—…κ³„μ˜ [ν˜„ λΆ€λ¬Έ] μΈ‘λ©΄μ—μ„œ [ν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬]μ—μ„œ κ·Όλ¬΄ν•˜λŠ” λ™μ•ˆ, [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 κ°•λ ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό 그듀이 μ œκ³΅ν•œ κΈ°λ°˜μ— κ°μ‚¬ν•΄μš”β€
  3. β€œν•˜μ§€λ§Œ 우리 μ—…κ³„μ˜ [λͺ©ν‘œ λΆ€λ¬Έ] 츑면에 점점 더 관심을 κ°–κ²Œ λ˜μ—ˆκ³ , 제 배경이 이 κ³΅κ°„μ˜ 쑰직에 도움이 될 수 μžˆλŠ” κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” 관점을 μ œκ³΅ν•œλ‹€κ³  λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[λͺ©ν‘œ λΆ€λ¬Έ]μ—μ„œ κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ μš°μˆ˜μ„±μ— λŒ€ν•œ λͺ…μ„±κ³Ό 이 μ—­ν• μ˜ λ²”μœ„λŠ” μ œκ°€ 이전 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ ν™œμš©ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ μ œκ°€ 열정적인 이 μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ λ°©ν–₯을 좔ꡬ할 수 μžˆλŠ” 이상적인 기회둜 λ³΄μ—¬μš”β€

25. νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ 윀리적 κ°€μΉ˜ 뢈일치둜 μΈν•œ 이직

β€œI’ve spent three years at [Current Company], where I’ve developed valuable skills in [specific area] and worked with many talented individuals. I’ve learned a great deal and contributed to [specific achievements]. As I’ve progressed in my career, I’ve gained clarity about the values that are most important to me professionally, including [specific values like transparency, sustainability, etc.]. I’m seeking an organization whose mission and practices align more closely with these values. Your company’s demonstrated commitment to [specific value-aligned practices] is what drew me to this opportunity. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my expertise to a team whose work reflects principles that are personally meaningful to me.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ 3년을 보내며 [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]μ—μ„œ κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  λ§Žμ€ 재λŠ₯ μžˆλŠ” κ°œμΈλ“€κ³Ό μΌν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œλ§Žμ΄ λ°°μ› κ³  [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]에 κΈ°μ—¬ν–ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ»€λ¦¬μ–΄κ°€ 진행됨에 따라, μ „λ¬Έμ μœΌλ‘œ 제게 κ°€μž₯ μ€‘μš”ν•œ κ°€μΉ˜μ— λŒ€ν•œ λͺ…확성을 μ–»μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ°€μΉ˜μ™€ 더 κ°€κΉκ²Œ μΌμΉ˜ν•˜λŠ” λ―Έμ…˜κ³Ό 관행을 κ°€μ§„ 쑰직을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œ[νŠΉμ • κ°€μΉ˜ 일치 κ΄€ν–‰]에 λŒ€ν•œ κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ μž…μ¦λœ ν—Œμ‹ μ΄ 이 κΈ°νšŒμ— μ €λ₯Ό μ΄λŒμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€

26. μ›ν•˜λŠ” μ‚°μ—…μœΌλ‘œμ˜ μ „ν™˜μ„ μœ„ν•œ 이직

β€œIn my current role at [Company] in the [current industry], I’ve developed strong transferable skills in [specific skills] and achieved [specific accomplishments]. While I’ve valued this experience, I’ve always been passionate about [target industry] and have been actively developing relevant knowledge through [specific activities]. When I saw this opportunity with your company, it seemed like the perfect chance to combine my established professional expertise with an industry I’m genuinely excited about. I believe my outsider perspective could bring fresh insights to your team, while my core skills in [specific transferable skills] would allow me to make immediate contributions while I deepen my industry-specific knowledge.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œ[ν˜„ 업계]의 [νšŒμ‚¬]μ—μ„œ ν˜„ 역할을 톡해 [νŠΉμ • 기술]μ—μ„œ κ°•λ ₯ν•œ 이전 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]λ₯Ό μ΄λ£¨μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œμ΄ κ²½ν—˜μ„ κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όμ§€λ§Œ, 항상 [λͺ©ν‘œ μ‚°μ—…]에 열정을 κ°€μ Έμ™”κ³  [νŠΉμ • ν™œλ™]을 톡해 κ΄€λ ¨ 지식을 적극적으둜 λ°œμ „μ‹œμΌœμ™”μ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 이 기회λ₯Ό λ³΄μ•˜μ„ λ•Œ, ν™•λ¦½λœ 전문적 μ „λ¬Έμ„±κ³Ό μ œκ°€ μ§„μ •μœΌλ‘œ ν₯λ―Έλ₯Ό λŠλΌλŠ” 산업을 κ²°ν•©ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” μ™„λ²½ν•œ 기회둜 λ³΄μ˜€μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ œ 아웃사이더 관점이 귀사 νŒ€μ— μ‹ μ„ ν•œ 톡찰λ ₯을 κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ 수 있으며, [νŠΉμ • 이전 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ 기술]μ—μ„œμ˜ 핡심 기술이 업계 νŠΉμ • 지식을 깊게 ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ 즉각적인 κΈ°μ—¬λ₯Ό ν•  수 있게 해쀄 것이라고 λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€

27. μ°½μ—… κ²½ν—˜ ν›„ κΈ°μ—…μœΌλ‘œ 볡귀

β€œRunning my own business for the past three years has been an incredible learning experience. I’ve developed diverse skills in [specific areas] and gained a holistic understanding of business operations. While I’m proud of what I built, I’ve realized that I miss being part of a larger team working toward shared goals. Your company’s collaborative culture and focus on [specific company strength] is what drew me to this opportunity. I believe my entrepreneurial experience gives me a unique perspective on [specific aspect of role], while rejoining a larger organization would allow me to focus my energy on the aspects of business I’m most passionate about and where I can add the most value.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œμ§€λ‚œ 3λ…„ λ™μ•ˆ μžμ‹ μ˜ 사업을 μš΄μ˜ν•˜λŠ” 것은 λ†€λΌμš΄ ν•™μŠ΅ κ²½ν—˜μ΄μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œ[νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]μ—μ„œ λ‹€μ–‘ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ μš΄μ˜μ— λŒ€ν•œ 총체적 이해λ₯Ό μ–»μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ œκ°€ κ΅¬μΆ•ν•œ 것이 μžλž‘μŠ€λŸ½μ§€λ§Œ, 곡유된 λͺ©ν‘œλ₯Ό ν–₯ν•΄ μΌν•˜λŠ” 더 큰 νŒ€μ˜ 일뢀가 λ˜λŠ” 것이 κ·Έλ¦½λ‹€λŠ” 것을 κΉ¨λ‹¬μ•˜μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œκ·€μ‚¬μ˜ ν˜‘λ ₯적 문화와 [νŠΉμ • νšŒμ‚¬ 강점]에 λŒ€ν•œ 초점이 이 κΈ°νšŒμ— μ €λ₯Ό μ΄λŒμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œμ œ 기업가적 κ²½ν—˜μ΄ [μ—­ν• μ˜ νŠΉμ • μΈ‘λ©΄]에 λ…νŠΉν•œ 관점을 μ œκ³΅ν•˜λ©°, 더 큰 쑰직에 μž¬ν•©λ₯˜ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ œκ°€ κ°€μž₯ 열정적이고 κ°€μž₯ λ§Žμ€ κ°€μΉ˜λ₯Ό 더할 수 μžˆλŠ” λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ 츑면에 μ—λ„ˆμ§€λ₯Ό 집쀑할 수 있게 해쀄 것이라고 λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€

28. 일-κ°€μ • κ· ν˜•μ„ μœ„ν•œ 이직 (μ™„κ³‘ν•˜κ²Œ)

β€œI’ve valued my experience at [Current Company], where I’ve been able to [specific accomplishments] and develop expertise in [specific skills]. The team has been supportive, and I’ve learned a great deal. As I consider my next career move, I’m seeking a role that allows me to continue making meaningful contributions while maintaining sustainable work practices for long-term success. Your company’s reputation for valuing outcomes over hours and supporting flexible work arrangements is very appealing to me. I believe that when employees have the autonomy to work in ways that suit their individual circumstances, they can bring their best selves to their professional roles. I’m excited about the possibility of bringing my experience to a company with this forward-thinking approach.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ κ²½ν—˜μ„ κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όκ³ , [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]λ₯Ό 이루고 [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 전문성을 λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚¬ 수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œνŒ€μ΄ μ§€μ›μ μ΄μ—ˆκ³  많이 λ°°μ› μ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œλ‹€μŒ 컀리어 이동을 κ³ λ €ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ, μž₯기적 성곡을 μœ„ν•œ 지속 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ 업무 관행을 μœ μ§€ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ 의미 μžˆλŠ” κΈ°μ—¬λ₯Ό 계속할 수 μžˆλŠ” 역할을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ‹œκ°„λ³΄λ‹€ κ²°κ³Όλ₯Ό κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κΈ°κ³  μœ μ—°ν•œ 업무 배치λ₯Ό μ§€μ›ν•˜λŠ” κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ λͺ…성이 맀우 λ§€λ ₯μ μ΄μ—μš”β€
  5. β€œμ§μ›λ“€μ΄ μžμ‹ μ˜ 개인적 상황에 λ§žλŠ” λ°©μ‹μœΌλ‘œ 일할 μžμœ¨μ„±μ„ κ°€μ§ˆ λ•Œ, κ·Έλ“€μ˜ μ΅œμ„ μ„ 전문적 역할에 κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ 수 μžˆλ‹€κ³  λ―Ώμ–΄μš”β€

29. νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ/μ΄λ‹ˆμ…”ν‹°λΈŒμ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜κΈ° μœ„ν•œ 이직

β€œMy current role at [Company] has allowed me to develop expertise in [specific skills] and contribute to important initiatives like [specific projects]. I’ve valued my time with the team and am proud of what we’ve accomplished. Recently, I’ve been following your company’s groundbreaking work in [specific project/initiative], which aligns perfectly with my professional interests and expertise. When I saw this opportunity to potentially join the team working on this initiative, I was immediately excited. I believe my background in [relevant experience] would bring valuable perspective to this project, and I’m eager to be part of work that’s pushing the boundaries in our field.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ 역할은 [νŠΉμ • 기술]에 전문성을 λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  [νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ]와 같은 μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ΄λ‹ˆμ…”ν‹°λΈŒμ— κΈ°μ—¬ν•  수 μžˆμ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œνŒ€κ³Όμ˜ μ‹œκ°„μ„ κ°€μΉ˜ 있게 μ—¬κ²Όκ³  μš°λ¦¬κ°€ 이룬 μ„±κ³Όκ°€ μžλž‘μŠ€λŸ¬μ›Œμš”β€
  3. β€œμ΅œκ·Όμ— 제 전문적 관심사와 μ „λ¬Έμ„±κ³Ό μ™„λ²½ν•˜κ²Œ μΌμΉ˜ν•˜λŠ” [νŠΉμ • ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈ/μ΄λ‹ˆμ…”ν‹°λΈŒ]μ—μ„œ κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ 획기적인 μž‘μ—…μ„ μ£Όμ‹œν•΄μ™”μ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œμ΄ μ΄λ‹ˆμ…”ν‹°λΈŒμ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜λŠ” νŒ€μ— ν•©λ₯˜ν•  κ°€λŠ₯성이 μžˆλŠ” 이 기회λ₯Ό λ³΄μ•˜μ„ λ•Œ, μ¦‰μ‹œ ν₯미둭게 λŠκΌˆμ–΄μš”β€
  5. β€œ[κ΄€λ ¨ κ²½ν—˜]μ—μ„œμ˜ 제 배경이 이 ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈμ— κ°€μΉ˜ μžˆλŠ” 관점을 κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ 것이라고 믿으며, 우리 λΆ„μ•Όμ—μ„œ 경계λ₯Ό λ°€μ–΄λΆ™μ΄λŠ” 일의 일뢀가 되고 μ‹Άμ–΄μš”β€

30. 영ν–₯λ ₯ μžˆλŠ” 역할을 μœ„ν•œ 이직

β€œIn my current position at [Company], I’ve developed strong skills in [specific area] and have enjoyed working with my team on [specific accomplishments]. What I’ve found most fulfilling are the projects where I could see a direct impact on our [customers/clients/users], but these opportunities have been somewhat limited in my current role. I’m seeking a position where I can make a more direct contribution to outcomes that matter. Your company’s mission to [company mission] resonates deeply with me, and this role seems to offer exactly the kind of impact-focused work I’m looking for. I’m excited about the possibility of applying my expertise to challenges that make a meaningful difference.”

μ™Έμ›Œκ°ˆ λΌˆλŒ€:

  1. β€œν˜„ νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œμ˜ μ§μ±…μ—μ„œ [νŠΉμ • μ˜μ—­]에 κ°•λ ₯ν•œ κΈ°μˆ μ„ λ°œμ „μ‹œν‚€κ³  νŒ€κ³Ό ν•¨κ»˜ [νŠΉμ • μ„±μ·¨]에 μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜λŠ” 것을 μ¦κ²Όμ–΄μš”β€
  2. β€œκ°€μž₯ 보람 있게 λŠλ‚€ 것은 [고객/ν΄λΌμ΄μ–ΈνŠΈ/μ‚¬μš©μž]μ—κ²Œ 직접적인 영ν–₯을 λ³Ό 수 μžˆλŠ” ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈμ˜€μ§€λ§Œ, μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κΈ°νšŒλŠ” ν˜„ μ—­ν• μ—μ„œ λ‹€μ†Œ μ œν•œμ μ΄μ—ˆμ–΄μš”β€
  3. β€œμ€‘μš”ν•œ 결과에 더 직접적인 κΈ°μ—¬λ₯Ό ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” 직책을 μ°Ύκ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”β€
  4. β€œ[νšŒμ‚¬ λ―Έμ…˜]μ΄λΌλŠ” κ·€μ‚¬μ˜ λ―Έμ…˜μ΄ μ €μ—κ²Œ 깊이 곡감되며, 이 역할은 μ œκ°€ μ°Ύκ³  μžˆλŠ” 영ν–₯λ ₯ μ€‘μ‹¬μ˜ 일을 μ œκ³΅ν•˜λŠ” 것 κ°™μ•„μš”β€
  5. β€œμ˜λ―Έ μžˆλŠ” 차이λ₯Ό λ§Œλ“œλŠ” 도전에 제 전문성을 μ μš©ν•  κ°€λŠ₯성에 κΈ°λŒ€ν•΄μš”β€

퇴사 μ‚¬μœ  λ‹΅λ³€ μ‹œ κΈ°μ–΅ν•΄μ•Ό ν•  핡심 포인트

  1. 항상 κΈμ •μ μœΌλ‘œ μ‹œμž‘ν•˜λΌ – ν˜„ 직μž₯μ—μ„œ 얻은 κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό κΈ°νšŒμ— λŒ€ν•œ 감사함을 ν‘œν˜„
  2. ꡬ체적인 업적을 μ–ΈκΈ‰ν•˜λΌ – ν˜„ 직μž₯μ—μ„œ 이룬 μ„±μ·¨λ₯Ό ꡬ체적으둜 μ–ΈκΈ‰ν•˜μ—¬ 기여도λ₯Ό λ³΄μ—¬μ€Œ
  3. 뢀정적 ν‘œν˜„μ„ ν”Όν•˜λΌ – ν˜„ 직μž₯μ΄λ‚˜ λ™λ£Œ, 상사λ₯Ό λΉ„νŒν•˜μ§€ 말 것
  4. 미래 μ§€ν–₯적으둜 λ§ν•˜λΌ – μ„±μž₯, λ°œμ „, μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 도전에 쀑점을 λ‘ 
  5. 진정성을 μœ μ§€ν•˜λΌ – μ‹€μ œ 상황과 λ§žλŠ” 이유λ₯Ό μ„ νƒν•˜μ—¬ μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ½κ²Œ λ‹΅λ³€

핡심 λΈŒλ¦Ώμ§€ ν‘œν˜„ λͺ¨μŒ

ν˜„ 직μž₯에 λŒ€ν•œ 긍정적인 μ–ΈκΈ‰:

  • β€œI’ve really enjoyed my time at…”
  • β€œMy experience at [Company] has been valuable…”
  • β€œI’ve learned a great deal at my current position…”
  • β€œWorking at [Company] has given me a solid foundation…”
  • β€œI’m grateful for the opportunities I’ve had at…”

얻은 κ²½ν—˜κ³Ό μ„±μž₯에 λŒ€ν•œ 감사:

  • β€œI’ve gained valuable experience in…”
  • β€œI’ve had the opportunity to work on…”
  • β€œI’ve been able to develop strong skills in…”
  • β€œI’ve particularly valued working with…”
  • β€œI’m proud of what I accomplished at…”

μ„±μž₯의 ν•œκ³„ μ„€λͺ…:

  • β€œHowever, I’m now looking for…”
  • β€œAt this point in my career, I’m seeking…”
  • β€œI’ve reached a stage where I’m ready for…”
  • β€œI’m eager to take on new challenges that…”
  • β€œI’m at a point where I want to focus more on…”

μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ κΈ°νšŒμ— λŒ€ν•œ κΈ°λŒ€:

  • β€œThat’s why I’m excited about this opportunity…”
  • β€œYour company offers exactly the kind of environment…”
  • β€œWhat attracts me to this role is…”
  • β€œI believe my experience would allow me to…”
  • β€œI’m eager to bring my skills to a team that…”

μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ 핡심 ν‘œν˜„λ“€μ„ 상황에 맞게 μ‘°ν•©ν•˜μ—¬ μžμ‹ λ§Œμ˜ μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ¬μš΄ 퇴사 μ‚¬μœ  닡변을 λ§Œλ“€ 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λͺ¨λ“  λ¬Έμž₯을 μ™Έμš°λ € ν•˜κΈ°λ³΄λ‹€λŠ” λ‹΅λ³€μ˜ λΌˆλŒ€λ₯Ό μ΄λ£¨λŠ” 이 ν‘œν˜„λ“€μ„ 읡히고, μ‹€μ œ λ©΄μ ‘μ—μ„œλŠ” μžμ‹ μ˜ 상황과 κ²½ν—˜μ— 맞게 μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ½κ²Œ λ§ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.


πŸ”— WORDPRESS ν¬μŠ€νŒ…:


πŸ†“ μˆœμˆ˜ν† μ’…μ˜Β λ¬΄λ£ŒΒ μ˜μ–΄λ©΄μ ‘ λ…Έν•˜μš°λŠ”Β 142만λͺ…이 보고 8천개의 μ’‹μ•„μš”λ₯Ό πŸ‘ λ°›μ•˜μ–΄μš”. κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‹ˆ λ‹Ήμ‹  λ§ˆμŒμ—λ„ λ“€κ²λ‹ˆλ‹€Β πŸ’Œ

πŸ”—Β [Twitter] 수백번 발차기 ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ μŒ“μ•„μ˜¨ μ˜μ–΄λ©΄μ ‘ λ…Έν•˜μš°

πŸ”—Β [POSTYPE]Β μ„œλ₯˜κ°€ 도톡 μ•ˆλ˜μš”. 이게 λ‹€ 00 μ„ μƒλ‹˜ λ•Œλ¬Έμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€ | μ„œλ₯˜κ°€ μ™œ μ•ˆλ κΉŒ? <μ‹œκΈ‰ν•œ ꡐ정 2>

πŸ”»

λ¬Έκ³Ό μΆœμ‹  내성적 Iν˜• μ‚¬λžŒλ“€μ„ μœ„ν•œ μ˜€λž«λ™μ•ˆ κ·Όλ¬΄ν•˜λ©° λͺ©λˆ λͺ¨μ„ 수 μžˆλŠ” μ‹€μ „ λ…Έν•˜μš°λ₯Ό κ³΅μœ ν•˜κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

외ꡭ계 νšŒμ‚¬μ™€ 싱가포λ₯΄ 근무와 ν•΄μ™Έ μƒν™œμ— λŒ€ν•œ μƒμƒν•œ κ²½ν—˜μ„ λ°”νƒ•μœΌλ‘œ, β€˜λ³΅μ„ΈνŽΈμ‚΄β€™μ„ μ§€ν–₯ν•˜λ©° λ¬Έκ³Ό μ‘Έμ—…μƒλ“€μ΄Β ν˜„μ‹€μ μœΌλ‘œΒ μ™Έκ΅­κ³„ 기업에 μ§„μž…ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” 방법과 μ˜μ–΄ 면접을 λΉ λ₯΄κ²Œ μ€€λΉ„ν•˜μ—¬, κΈ€λ‘œλ²Œ κΈ°μ—… μ„œλΉ„μŠ€ 및 μ„ΈμΌμ¦ˆμ§μ— μ§„μž…ν•  수 μžˆλ„λ‘ 돕고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

ν˜„μž¬ ν¬μŠ€νƒ€μž…μ—μ„œ 3,000λͺ… πŸ“ˆ 넀이버 λΈ”λ‘œκ·Έμ—μ„œ 1,900λͺ… πŸ“ˆ μ΄μƒμ˜ λ…μžλ“€κ³Ό μ†Œν†΅ν•˜κ³  있으며, νŠΈμœ„ν„°μ—μ„œλŠ” 16,000λͺ… πŸ“ˆ μ΄μƒμ˜ νŒ”λ‘œμ›Œλ“€μ—κ²ŒΒ κ΄€λ ¨ 정보λ₯Ό μ „λ‹¬ν•˜κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.


πŸ”– ebook μ‹±κ°€ν΄μ—μ„œ 일본어에 그토둝 λͺ©λ§¨ 이유

ꡐ보문고, λ°€λ¦¬μ˜ μ„œμž¬, 뢁큐브, λ¦¬λ””μ—μ„œ λ³Ό 수 μžˆμ–΄μš” πŸ’° 1,500 KRW

πŸ”– ebook λ‚˜μ˜€λŠ” 질문만 λ‚˜μ˜€λŠ” μ˜μ–΄λ©΄μ ‘

zero 슀트레슀 μ˜μ–΄λ©΄μ ‘ μ€€λΉ„λ₯Ό μœ„ν•΄ 이미 μ€€λΉ„λœ μ˜μ–΄ μŠ€ν¬λ¦½νŠΈλŠ” μ•„λž˜ μ„œμ μ—μ„œ λ³Ό 수 μžˆμ–΄μš” πŸ‘“


λͺ» ν‘ΈλŠ” λ¬Έκ³Όμƒμ˜ λ¬Έμ œλŠ” μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€

πŸ“© The purpose of this letter is to debunk

μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό μž˜ν•΄μ•Όλ§Œ μ˜μ–΄ λ©΄μ ‘ λ³Ό 수 μžˆλ‹¨ κ·Έλ¦‡λœ μ˜€ν•΄Β and, 동기뢀여 팍팍! 본격 μž‘λ‹Ήλͺ¨μ˜ 🐯

🎧 지원동기가 λ­”κ°€μš”? β€˜λˆ λ²Œλ €κ³ μš”β€¦β€™ λ§κ³ λŠ” 생각 μ•ˆλ‚  λ•Œ

Ep.5 잘λͺ¨λ₯΄λŠ” νšŒμ‚¬μ—μ„œ 인터뷰 보자고 β€˜κ°„νƒβ€™ λ‹Ήν–ˆμ„ λ•Œ

Β πŸ”— Catch up on earlier episodes

(click)Β Ep.1Β ν•΄μ™Έμ·¨μ—…! 외ꡭ계취업! ν•˜κ³  싢은데 μ˜μ–΄.. λ₯Ό λͺ»ν•΄μš”..Β 

(click)Β Ep.2Β ν‡΄μ‚¬μ‚¬μœ  μ™„κ³‘ν•˜κ²Œ λΆ€λ“œλŸ½κ²Œ λ§ν•˜κΈ°

(click)Β Ep.3Β ν•œκ΅­μ„ λ– λ‚˜ 해외취업을 μ›ν•˜λŠ” μ΄μœ κ°€ λ­”κ°€μš”?

(click)Β Ep.4 직무&업계 λ°”κΎΈλ €λŠ” μ΄μœ κ°€ λ­”κ°€μš”?

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